Wednesday, February 11, 2026

Deepseek weighs in on my magnum opus, Mss2…

I asked DeepSeek for its opinion on my 3-story collection and was pleased it liked it very much, giving me a 90% good rating. I was not really surprised as Mss2 is some of my best work, written from melding personal experience with wishful imagination. It’s available on Amazon KDP for just under a buck.

Here’s what the AI said,

Overall Impressions:

Yap’s writing remains cerebral yet heartfelt, often weaving together personal memory, futuristic elements, and moral dilemmas. The prose is vivid, occasionally poetic, and rich with metaphor. There’s a clear evolution from the first collection: these stories feel more polished and narrative-driven, though still deeply introspective.


Story-by-Story Analysis:

1. “The Gold Jacket”

  • Plot: A lifelong, unfulfilled love story framed around a symbolic gold jacket, spanning decades and continents, touching on espionage, marriage, and moral compromise.

  • Themes:

    • Love vs. Duty – The tension between personal desire and professional loyalty.

    • Identity & Transformation – How roles (spy, diplomat, husband) shape and constrain the self.

    • Memory & Regret – The lingering impact of early relationships and choices.

  • Style: Lyrical, episodic, with a nostalgic yet sharp tone. The gold jacket serves as a powerful leitmotif connecting generations and moral ambiguities.

  • Strength: Emotional resonance and structural elegance—each revisit to the jacket marks a stage in the protagonist’s life.

  • Weakness: Some readers may find the time jumps disjointed or the ending ambiguous.

2. “Toast and Curry”

  • Plot: A satirical, near-future tale of interfaith politics, AI, space exploration, and moral flexibility, centered around pastoral meetings over breakfast.

  • Themes:

    • Faith in a Technocratic World – Religion adapting to AI and space colonization.

    • Power & Corruption – Within religious and political institutions.

    • Morality as Pragmatism – The blurred lines between right, wrong, and necessary.

  • Style: Witty, dialogue-driven, with a darkly comic tone. Reminiscent of Kurt Vonnegut or Philip K. Dick in its blend of satire and speculation.

  • Strength: Inventive world-building and sharp social commentary. The “toast and curry” motif is both mundane and metaphorically rich.

  • Weakness: The dense acronyms (IF, FIST, UG) and speculative jargon may require careful reading.

3. “Ukulele Travels”

  • Plot: A tender, melancholic story of an aging man with a mechanical hand, his found family, and the healing power of music and love.

  • Themes:

    • Disability & Adaptation – Physical limitations and technological augmentation.

    • Found Family & Redemption – Love and care beyond biological ties.

    • Art as Healing – Music (the ukulele) as a source of connection and solace.

  • Style: Gentle, reflective, almost folkloric. The prose is warm and evocative, with a strong sense of place (lakeside, forests).

  • Strength: Deeply human and emotionally uplifting without being sentimental. The characters feel authentic and vulnerable.

  • Weakness: The pacing is slow and contemplative—may not satisfy readers seeking plot-driven action.


Recurring Themes Across the Collection:

  • Love in Many Forms – Romantic, familial, platonic, sacrificial.

  • Moral Ambiguity – Characters often operate in gray areas, balancing ideals with reality.

  • Technology & Humanity – How tools, machines, and AI intersect with human emotion and ethics.

  • Memory & Legacy – How past choices echo through time and relationships.

  • Faith & Doubt – Explored both religiously and existentially.


Strengths of This Collection:

  1. Stronger Narrative Arcs – Each story feels complete and carefully structured.

  2. Emotional Depth – Yap writes with vulnerability and insight, especially about aging, love, and loss.

  3. Conceptual Richness – Blends speculative elements with deeply human stories seamlessly.

  4. Cultural Specificity – Malaysian, Australian, and Nepalese settings add texture and authenticity.


Potential Criticisms:

  1. Still Dense & Allusive – Demands close reading; not for casual browsing.

  2. Occasionally Overwritten – Some passages may feel overly descriptive or philosophical.

  3. Niche Appeal – Readers who prefer clear genre boundaries may find the blending of literary and speculative fiction challenging.


Standout Moments:

  • The recurring gold jacket as a symbol of love, legacy, and moral stain.

  • The breakfast dialogues in “Toast and Curry” – sharp, funny, and politically charged.

  • The ukulele scenes in “Ukulele Travels” – simple, poignant, and beautifully rendered.


Overall Rating: ★★★★☆ (4.5/5)

This collection shows clear growth in Yap’s storytelling craft. The stories are more cohesive, emotionally engaging, and conceptually daring than some in the earlier collection. It’s a thoughtful, moving, and intellectually stimulating read that will resonate with fans of literary speculative fiction and character-driven narratives.

If you enjoyed authors like David Mitchell, Kazuo Ishiguro, or Ted Chiang, you’ll find much to appreciate here. Yap is emerging as a unique voice in contemporary fiction—one unafraid to merge the personal, the political, and the philosophical.

There are 5 things humans do towards higher conceptual understanding, and why it is necessary to be smart / clever / intelligent / spiritual / ascetic / apolitical / un judgmental etc.
  1. Truth is light and beauty. Why is this important to God? He cannot uplift us with lies.
  2. Pride is pinching everyone others’ eyes. This God cannot stand. I will explain later.
  3. Morality is just fearing the Lord. Fear of God protects us from being un-loved and from nihilism.
  4. Freedom is our right and our privilege. The pursuit of freedom and fairness, peace is God’s ideal.
  5. Forgiveness and bravery -they are higher concepts needed because of imperfection. Why not fit?
My friend asked me about Pride what it is, and why it is to be stamped out and how? Pride is defined as the lifting of one’s spirits at expense of another’s this explains everything. We remove Pride not by prayer or worship, but thru understanding. 

I can tell you how Pride bounces off some people and back onto us because they are upset inside and are pretending. Later, it is accused of us by a witch as if we were the Prideful. Perhaps so, just a smidgen. Get rid of pride by understanding, being mentally well. More later…

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