The mindspace is still very unsettled so I have not yet finished chapters 16-20, the most important and exciting part of my novella. I am being hit with a headache and gas. It’s almost 4pm. Hard to get anything done under this oppression. Thought of switching to my ThinkPad but am still blocked.
Went out for lunch at Sri Karak. Food was good. Feeling satisfied. Need to take a walk this evening at the park, maybe after dinner. Plan to make a bitter gourd, avocado, tomato salad which we’ll have with roast pork takeaway.
As for work, a long, impossible journey starts with a single step so here goes…
Managed to do 2 chapters. 3 to go. Liew witchy army kids pressing people together, running their emotions and poking with pain-giving. It’s not normal, young ones. We tried fighting them off with tastes of grownup things, even Bible warnings against bullying kids into sin. Hope something works soon.
Seems God has intervened, mixing up the military strength of opposing nations and maybe more, later. We sense a shift in power coming on. It was a joint effort between the Most High, and his Saints.
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Dinner was good. The bitter gourd wasn’t very bitter. These small pointy variants are healthy, and used by Indians in their cooking, even in cafes / mamak. Feeling phantomly sorrowful. Can sense the Father inscribing his will onto people worldwide. Just weeks to go before we see a new world order, probably imposed thru Trump and his tariffs, and AI, crypto.
Work keeps getting interrupted by mental miscreants. I think I will not be able to finish chapter 19-20 tonight. 3 out of 5 isn’t bad. I am going slowly, massaging the plot edits along through the characters’ interplay. Not 100% sure what will happen next. Just that I have to stop soon. Miscreants are swarming all over the mindspace.
I’m digging into the final chapter now. Take a break to see what the Liews have done. Indoctrinate kids against the west. I need to find a quick way of making them see truth which had been mangled and doctored all these years by both sides corrupting one another. They are reading history off my back so I csnnot work yet and it’s nearing 11pm. 12am to sleep. Worked out a bit more as tomorrow will skip due to my Arip jab.
Used my used ThinkPad to edit Act 3. I gave it an XP theme for KDE round when I started. Seems to make everyone looking on happier otherwise writing, editing is a drag. Someone told them my future and it wasn’t perfect coming true.
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Have to rope in all remaining brain cells to close my edit of iS well. Ran a comprehensive spellcheck which caught more than a few glaring errors. Also, some formatting was off. Western forces caught by witchcraft from the Liews need help but are proud. They actually should see a shrink like I do.
Was thinking of adding 4 or 5 pages to chapter 20 but that would seem contrived, an info-drop, like I hadn’t planned the story well. So much is possible to screw up or fail to pay off here. Helped the westerners regain their minds from the witchy genius control. There is now some mud slinging going on. The way it originally started.
Working together, we pushed off the Asian witch, pointing out the holes in her false logic. Now she’s resorting to popular violence, grabbing a kid and baby jury / audience.
I trudged halfway thru chp20 (final one). Need to add about 1 1/2 pages of twisty dialogue and maybe a bit of action. But mindspace duty calls.
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For some reason, I'm lucky and iS finished with a cool twist, just a half twist, maybe, but a pretty poignant one. I will upload the PDF tomorrow night after a final look thru.
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