Saturday, April 11, 2026

Synopsis: I'm actively writing SDU again...

Dad is going out of town for the weekend and I and Mom will be alone for 2 days. Feeling okay, as I worked out and took my meds. Yet to brush. Ok brushed and am ready to turn in. Plotting SDU chapter 6 is hell. 

  1. Esmeralda dies and Derek finds Stacy wounded in the sinkhole, hiding from the other cloaks / tailors.

  2. Hoag has gathered power -allying with the Lotus-Quen-Little Lotus witch group. There is a reason, Derek hibernated so long that the Tribulation started without him. Little Lotus has an OnlyFans page -being beautiful and looking to influence for make benefit the witchcraft she purveys.

Sorry if the fonts are a little big, but the rest of the chapter needs plotting (SDU is an online serialized novel here, so it should be okay to plot on this blog.


3. Some place in his heart

    Derek finds out how his friends and family died and his new relationship with Stacy satisfies him. Esmeralda's sudden death haunts him, and he vows to fight the evil.


4. A failed arrest 

    Hoag and Daphne attempt to bring in Derek but (as titled) fail. They give him something to remember them by.

 
5. Big C

    Derek suspects he may have cancer. This plays havoc with his powers. A troubling chapter with lots of introspection,

6. Shadow of an angel 

    Gabriel heals Derek but at the cost of most of his powers.


7. Repentance 

    Lotus appears in disguise and asks for forgiveness. They talk about religion and the resurrection and Derek learns more than he bargains for from the consummate witch.


8. A secret message 

    A lead up to chapter 7. I remember in CHP 8, Derek dies a martyr, in CHP 9, his friends are resurrected, and in CHP 10, they reunite. The key anchors here are the conversations with Gabriel, Jesus, and God -and the common misconceptions about religion versus politics. God's personality is revealed -take it or leave it and Derek has to decide on the contents of a secret message which may be his undoing.

 

CHAPTER 7

    The secret message leads Derek, now fighting with his wits more than his powers to a rendezvous with Little Lotus, Hoag, and Daphne. He witnesses his super children killed by the government's treachery and superior IQ. Himself is trapped by Master Mark and Pete. Derek fights for his life against the powerful tailors and breaks free but by CHP 8, can no longer survive.

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Circa 1am. Feeling sleepy. Liew witches prodding my friends. Wearing my 1400H on black nylon. Think I will finish SDU CHP 6 tomorrow. Then CHP 7 on Sunday.

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